Mar 18, 2012

Untitled Fire

(first draft Volcano, Untitled Fire v1. Published in An Anthology of Verse, National Library of Canada. Rev.)



I could not stop 
my heart
 flew into the fire
i was the moth
 you were the flame

we burned 
slow like an ember
  then suddenly
like a volcano

in your hands
my heart 
  like a box 
you struck with a match 
and said 
you didn't want forever

   and you smoked her soul like a cigarette 
        till there was nothing left  
            only ashes


i felt used
i felt taken
i felt bitter
i felt pissed
It's like you knew me from the inside
 with your fingers hands and fists

broken open 
 parts inside me
  false made into true
til there was nothing left
for me to do but thank you





2024-------------------------------------------------------------------------Untitled Fire v2
Hollow Tube 

I could not stop 

my heart flew into the fire

i was the moth you were the flame

we burned
slow like an ember
  then suddenly

    like a volcano

in your hands
my heart 
  like a box 
you struck with a match 
and said 
you didn't want forever

   and you smoked her soul like a cigarette 
        till there was nothing left shimmering
            only ashes ..



“ particles .. (blown in the air)

water droplets .. (collected, cling to form)

 storm clouds .. (that unload rain, lightning and thunder) ”


i felt used

i was taken   

turned to bitter

just one kiss

 you only knew me from the inside with your fingers hands and fists



Open channel was i 

Free 

Changed totally

All parts of me

   Leaving behind a long echo 







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