(first draft Volcano, Untitled Fire v1. Published in An Anthology of Verse, National Library of Canada. Rev.)
I could not stop
I could not stop
my heart
flew into the fire
i was the moth
you were the flame
we burned
slow like an ember
then suddenly
like a volcano
in your hands
my heart
like a box
you struck with a match
and said
you didn't want forever
and you smoked her soul like a cigarette
till there was nothing left
only ashes
i felt used
i felt taken
i felt bitter
i felt pissed
It's like you knew me from the inside
with your fingers hands and fists
broken open
parts inside me
false made into true
til there was nothing left
for me to do but thank you
2024-------------------------------------------------------------------------Untitled Fire v2
Hollow Tube
Hollow Tube
I could not stop
my heart flew into the fire
i was the moth you were the flame
we burned
slow like an ember
then suddenly
like a volcano
in your hands
my heart
like a box
you struck with a match
and said
you didn't want forever
and you smoked her soul like a cigarette
till there was nothing left shimmering
only ashes ..
“ particles .. (blown in the air)
water droplets .. (collected, cling to form)
storm clouds .. (that unload rain, lightning and thunder) ”
i felt used
i was taken
turned to bitter
just one kiss
you only knew me from the inside with your fingers hands and fists
Open channel was i
Free
Changed totally
All parts of me
Leaving behind a long echo
*
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